After finishing this one, I got kinda worried because everyone who saw it couldn't understand the story. It might be because I used a story that requires a little of a twisted mind to comprehend. We'll have to see.
post war: Comments I received was -
- The final frame was nigh understandable. It was only when I pointed out that it was scythes on the floor did people go "Ohh..." That one needs editting.
- The twist is too shady, and more than one twist makes the story harder to comprehend. The original intention for the twist is that I beat the Reaper, and that more than one has tried to collect my soul, but I figured that this is not good: People cannot get the twist easily. The climax was also not very prominent as well. Might be changing the last few scenes totally.
1 comment:
Yap, I have a twisted mind. Cos I totally understand the plot.
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