Assignment 1- Me Myself and I : Tutorial draft

After a few revisions and reflections, I drew up the following for tutorial:



This is the "Love to draw" theme. The feedback I got:
First one: The drawing mediums were not enough. That I agree, but if I were to add more, it might cause confusion and make the piece seem like I like Art, more than I like drawing. Second is the straight strokes. It's better that they are one continuous stroke. Easier done on Photoshop than paper, though.
Second one: The stickmen need to be more expressive, and need to have some varying factor. Well, though they have no face, they still can dance more, so I'm improving on it. Most likely this will be the final one too. Gotta love stickmen.



This is the hate part. I figured that I hate cockroaches much more than the game controller so I switched to this theme instead. The comments:

First: Slipper is too ambiguous. The insecticide isn't obvious enough at first glance. Cockroaches aren't obvious enough. The newspaper needs to have more details on them to make it look more obvious. All point taken. This will definitely be my choice for the final.

Second: Too plain. The tombstone needs more texture. The letters V and N needs more expression. I made the mistake of showing the first drawing before the second, so it was a "nice and not so nice" instead of a "nice and nicer" =/
Nevertheless, it definitely needs alterations.